its funny each time i tell my self its over,
i neveer trully give up,
i try so hard to forget your face,
the feeling that i fee l for you,
but then i see you again,
and it all starts,
now you tell me truthfully there is no hope,
i cried for the dream i have held close,
that kept me going when there was nothing left,
although my heart is breaking once again,
i know it will be ok.
i willl always love one,
maybe not in the way i dreamed but i will,
this is cloure,
its over.

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That is really harsh to say to someone

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I don't think it was meant to be harsh. She does say she still loves her ex-lover. She is mourning a romance that failed, and as you may know there are few things sadder than that.

I've seen a lot of harsher things, believe me!

Welcome to Random & Dark. We're always happy to see new people, so thanks for contributing your views.

D

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it is about a life experience the person (me) has had, where the one person they rely on and have been there for and love, tells them its over and the person (me) haveing to come to terms with that and move on altho they will never really get over the person. so before you dis my work think about it and interpret it.

sorry for having a go david considering your politeness but there we go. its my work.

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Oh, Emma, you know you have a perfect right to respond to people's comments. I wouldn't even dream of asking you to hold back :-).

And you are right. She didn't get it.

I'm always polite. It's in my nature. And of course it makes impolite people look folish.

It was a tactic mastered by William F Buckley, who died a couple of days ago. Shed a tear for a master.

D

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heya,
yeah i no i do lol i just did not want to offend you lol.
i no it is lol. erm i will say sorry to the world for the loss of the dude but cant shed aa tear as i dont no him.
E -x-

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Shed a tear is just an expression, so don't worry.

I don't know if he really deserves tears ... one of the interesting things about him is that he led a happy, indeed exuberant life.

There are a lot of unhappy people to shed tears over and he was never one of them :-).

Of course that makes it all the more sad that he's gone.

Paradoxical, no?

So when do we see more of Random and Dark? I miss reading your stuff ;-).

D

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you will when i get off my writers block step lol. i cant do deep atm lol. we shall see how productive my weekend is and i will give it a go. im not as good as i used to be as i have nothing to feel depressed over.

E

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How about if we create "Sweetness and Light" and you can post some happy poetry?

Or can you really not write unless you are depressed?

I am glad to see a non-depressed Emma. What's been going on to cause this happy state?

D

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i could write if im happy but it would be of a rubbish quality. i dont really sdo writing pleasent stuff more painful life experiences... nothing really just dont have a reason to be sad lol.

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Why do you think that writing when you're happy creates rubbish?

Is your life goal to be happy, or to be sad so you can write?

xxxxx

D

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not really sure i have to be totally passionate about my writing and that seems to be when i am low as a sense of release i produce decent poems. hugs.
xxx

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